Rough Cut One

Audience feedback
Mollie Rose Turkentine- 17
Positives

• Good alarm clock framing
• Liked the camera angles, especially pans

Negatives

• Non diegetic sound would make story clearer
• Very slow paced

Steven Adcock- 17

Positives

• speech was clear
• Liked the different lighting
• Liked titles

Negatives

• Not enough happened in the time
• Music would be good

James Dye- 15

Positives

• It built tension, wants to see the rest
• Webcam scenes made him feel like the character was talking to him

Negative

• Needs music
• very slow not a lot happened it would be better if things were quicker.

Feedback gathered by Olivia Saltmarsh